Last Call Review of draft-ietf-aqm-fq-implementation-02
review-ietf-aqm-fq-implementation-02-opsdir-lc-schoenwaelder-2015-10-12-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-aqm-fq-implementation
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2015-10-15
Requested 2015-10-09
Draft last updated 2015-10-12
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -02 by Pete Resnick (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Sandra Murphy (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -02 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Jürgen Schönwälder
State Completed
Review review-ietf-aqm-fq-implementation-02-opsdir-lc-schoenwaelder-2015-10-12
Reviewed rev. 02 (document currently at 05)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2015-10-12

Review
review-ietf-aqm-fq-implementation-02-opsdir-lc-schoenwaelder-2015-10-12

Hi,

I have reviewed draft-ietf-aqm-fq-implementation-02 as part of the
Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents
being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written with the
intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF
drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs
should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

I believe the document is 'Ready' for publication.

The informational document is to some extend a tutorial on queuing,
marking and dropping algorithms. The main observation stated in the
conclusions of the document is that marking/dropping algorithms are
conceptually separate from queueing mechanisms and that specifications
should decouple them even though they might be implemented in a
coupled manner. I think it would help the reader if the abstract would
be expanded.

OLD

   This note discusses implementation strategies for coupled queuing and
   mark/drop algorithms.

NEW

   This note discusses queuing and marking/dropping algorithms. While
   these algorithms are often implemented in a coupled manner, this
   note argues that specifications, measurements, and comparisons
   should decouple the different algorithms and their contributions to
   system behavior.

/js

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