Last Call Review of draft-ietf-appsawg-file-scheme-14
review-ietf-appsawg-file-scheme-14-opsdir-lc-zhou-2016-12-12-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-appsawg-file-scheme
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 16)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2016-12-06
Requested 2016-11-23
Authors Matthew Kerwin
Draft last updated 2016-12-12
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -14 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Barry Leiba (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -14 by Tianran Zhou (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tianran Zhou
State Completed
Review review-ietf-appsawg-file-scheme-14-opsdir-lc-zhou-2016-12-12
Reviewed rev. 14 (document currently at 16)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2016-12-12

Review
review-ietf-appsawg-file-scheme-14-opsdir-lc-zhou-2016-12-12

Hi Authors,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Document reviewed:  draft-ietf-appsawg-file-scheme-14

Summary:
- This document specifies the file URI scheme.
- I do not see any specific operations or management aspects that need special considerations. So from an OPS-DIR point of view, I think this doc is ready for publication as RFC.

Editorial Comments:
In section 6, please expand the acronym LWP. Also better to expand API (Application Programming Interface). Although the terms may be reasonably well know, not everyone may know.


Regards,
Tianran