Last Call Review of draft-ietf-appsawg-acct-uri-03

Request Review of draft-ietf-appsawg-acct-uri
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-03-06
Requested 2013-02-21
Authors Peter Saint-Andre
Draft last updated 2013-03-08
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -03 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -03 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Charlie Kaufman (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-appsawg-acct-uri-03-genart-lc-shirazipour-2013-03-08
Reviewed rev. 03 (document currently at 07)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2013-03-08


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Document: draft-ietf-appsawg-acct-uri-03

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour

Review Date: 2013-03-06

IETF LC End Date: 2013-03-06

IESG Telechat date: NA




This draft is ready to be published as Proposed Standard but I have some comments.



Nits/editorial comments:

[Page 1] please consider spelling out "URI" in the abstract as in "uniform resource identifier (URI)"

[Page 3] paragraph 4, "method for deferencing", do you mean "dereferencing" ?

[Page 5] Section 5, "..access to personally identifying information..", do you mean "..access to identifiable personal information" ?



Best Regards,



Meral Shirazipour