Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ace-cwt-proof-of-possession-11
review-ietf-ace-cwt-proof-of-possession-11-secdir-telechat-nir-2019-11-01-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ace-cwt-proof-of-possession
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Telechat Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2019-10-29
Requested 2019-10-21
Authors Michael Jones, Ludwig Seitz, Göran Selander, Samuel Erdtman, Hannes Tschofenig
Draft last updated 2019-11-01
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -11 by Yoav Nir
Assignment Reviewer Yoav Nir
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ace-cwt-proof-of-possession-11-secdir-telechat-nir-2019-11-01
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/JuBcitpE2OYQzzfI3k7EedaEm_M
Reviewed rev. 11
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2019-11-01

Review
review-ietf-ace-cwt-proof-of-possession-11-secdir-telechat-nir-2019-11-01

This is the second secdir review of this document. I'm reviewing version -11. The previous review was of version -08.

All my concerns were addressed, except one:  I still think it's strange that the Introduction section is an exact repeat of the Abstract.