Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ace-coap-est-15
review-ietf-ace-coap-est-15-genart-lc-schinazi-2019-10-05-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ace-coap-est
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 18)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-10-18
Requested 2019-10-04
Authors Peter Van der Stok, Panos Kampanakis, Michael Richardson, Shahid Raza
Draft last updated 2019-10-05
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -15 by David Schinazi (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Yaron Sheffer (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -17 by Yaron Sheffer (diff)
Assignment Reviewer David Schinazi
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ace-coap-est-15-genart-lc-schinazi-2019-10-05
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/j1CvGpoIHFijQVjb4mnxMIFxemk
Reviewed rev. 15 (document currently at 18)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2019-10-05

Review
review-ietf-ace-coap-est-15-genart-lc-schinazi-2019-10-05

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Document: draft-ietf-ace-coap-est-??
Reviewer: David Schinazi
Review Date: 2019-10-05
IETF LC End Date: 2019-10-18
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Document is clear and well-written.

Major issues: None.

Minor issues: None.

Nits/editorial comments: I believe references to RFC7525 should instead refer to it as BCP195 to point to future revisions.