Last Call Review of draft-ietf-6man-predictable-fragment-id-09
review-ietf-6man-predictable-fragment-id-09-genart-lc-shirazipour-2015-09-11-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-6man-predictable-fragment-id
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-09-09
Requested 2015-08-27
Draft last updated 2015-09-11
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -09 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -10 by Meral Shirazipour
Opsdir Last Call review of -09 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -10 by Klaas Wierenga
Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Klaas Wierenga (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Review review-ietf-6man-predictable-fragment-id-09-genart-lc-shirazipour-2015-09-11
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 10)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2015-09-11

Review
review-ietf-6man-predictable-fragment-id-09-genart-lc-shirazipour-2015-09-11

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Document:draft-ietf-6man-predictable-fragment-id-09
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date:2015-09-09
IETF LC End Date:2015-09-09 
IESG Telechat date: (if known)

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC, but I have some editorial comments.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 6] line 7, "the the Identification"--extra 'the'-->"the Identification"
-[Page 15], Appendix A., "the the algorithm specified"-extra 'the'-->"the algorithm specified"
-[Page 16], "(assumming the"--->"(assuming the"
-[Page 16], would be useful to have figure captions if the message exchanges are figures as referred to in the text.
-General, please spell out acronyms at first use, e.g. PRNG, DoS etc.


Best Regards,
Meral
---
Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
www.ericsson.com