Early Review of draft-ietf-6lo-privacy-considerations-03
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Request Review of draft-ietf-6lo-privacy-considerations
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Early Review
Team Internet Area Directorate (intdir)
Deadline 2016-09-26
Requested 2016-09-14
Authors Dave Thaler
Draft last updated 2016-09-26
Completed reviews Genart Telechat review of -04 by Paul Kyzivat
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Benjamin Kaduk
Intdir Early review of -03 by Tatuya Jinmei (diff)
Intdir Early review of -03 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Ron Bonica
Assignment Reviewer Jouni Korhonen 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-6lo-privacy-considerations-03-intdir-early-korhonen-2016-09-26
Reviewed rev. 03 (document currently at 04)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2016-09-26

Review
review-ietf-6lo-privacy-considerations-03-intdir-early-korhonen-2016-09-26

I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for 

draft-ietf-6lo-privacy-

considerations-03

. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet
                Area Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate, see 

http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate.html

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Document: draft-ietf-6lo-privacy-considerations-03


Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen


Review Date: 9/22/2016


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Summary: Ready





Major issues: None





Minor issues: None





Nits/editorial comments:

1) Page 4 first paragraph states it takes a year to scan 26 bit of id space. Even if the math is given in the next paragraph it is not clear what are the assumptions to number of devices per link. I take it is one device on that link.

2) Page 5 table has "6 or ???" for NFC.. it would be good to either replace "???" with something meaningful or explain why "???".

Regards,

 Jouni