Telechat Review of draft-iab-2870bis-02

Request Review of draft-iab-2870bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2015-03-10
Requested 2015-03-11
Authors Marc Blanchet, Lars-Johan Liman
Draft last updated 2015-03-21
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -01 by Martin Thomson (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -01 by Martin Thomson (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Mahalingam Mani (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -02 by Mahalingam Mani (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Klaas Wierenga (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Mahalingam Mani 
State Completed
Review review-iab-2870bis-02-opsdir-telechat-mani-2015-03-21
Reviewed rev. 02 (document currently at 03)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2015-03-21


[I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing 

effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. 

These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the 

operational area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should 

treat these comments just like any other last call comments]

The purpose of 2870bis itself, as stated up front in the introduction, is to separate operational requirements from protocol and deployment requirements. The operational requirements now reference a document 




 outside of this SDO. This document has protocol requirements and some deployment requirements: I have no OAM-related concerns on the stated deployment requirements.

Many of the security considerations in the original RFC2870 are themselves related to operational considerations and they are hopefully (re)captured fully in 



]. A

lthough security considerations on respective DNS protocols are captured in respective RFCs; operational security considerations are critical to the security of the DNS (and, hence, the internet) infrastructure.

nit(s): The IDnits are showing up some fixes in need which are not currently impacting the subject-semantics or syntax of the draft.