Last Call Review of draft-iab-2870bis-01
review-iab-2870bis-01-opsdir-lc-mani-2014-06-24-00

Request Review of draft-iab-2870bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2014-06-20
Requested 2014-05-26
Draft last updated 2014-06-24
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -01 by Martin Thomson (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -01 by Martin Thomson (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Mahalingam Mani (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -02 by Mahalingam Mani (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Klaas Wierenga (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Mahalingam Mani
State Completed
Review review-iab-2870bis-01-opsdir-lc-mani-2014-06-24
Reviewed rev. 01 (document currently at 03)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2014-06-24

Review
review-iab-2870bis-01-opsdir-lc-mani-2014-06-24

[I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's
 ongoing 

effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. 

These comments were written
 primarily for the benefit of the

operational area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should 

treat these comments just like any other last call comments]

The purpose of 2870bis itself, as stated up front in the introduction, is to separate operational requirements from protocol and deployment requirements. The operational requirements now reference a document 

[

RSSAC-001

]

 outside of this SDO. This document has protocol requirements and some deployment requirements: I have no OAM-related concerns on the
 stated deployment requirements.

Many of the security considerations in the original RFC2870 are themselves related to operational considerations and they are hopefully (re)captured fully in 

[

RSSAC-001

]. A

lthough security considerations on respective DNS protocols are captured in respective RFCs; operational security considerations are critical to the security of the DNS (and, hence, the internet) infrastructure.

Thanks,

-mani