Last Call Review of draft-iab-2870bis-01
review-iab-2870bis-01-genart-lc-thomson-2014-05-23-00

Request Review of draft-iab-2870bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-06-20
Requested 2014-05-22
Draft last updated 2014-05-23
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -01 by Martin Thomson (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -01 by Martin Thomson (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Mahalingam Mani (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -02 by Mahalingam Mani (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Klaas Wierenga (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Martin Thomson
State Completed
Review review-iab-2870bis-01-genart-lc-thomson-2014-05-23
Reviewed rev. 01 (document currently at 03)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2014-05-23

Review
review-iab-2870bis-01-genart-lc-thomson-2014-05-23

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Document: draft-iab-2870bis-01
Reviewer: Martin Thomson
Review Date:
IETF LC End Date: 2014-06-20
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Summary: Looks good.

Major issues: None

Minor issues:

This seems like a prohibition by omission:
      MAY also serve the root-servers.net zone, and the zone for the
      .arpa top-level domain [ARPAZONE],[RFC3172].
That is, it could be read to imply that root servers are prohibited
from serving other zones.  Why was this position taken rather than
simply noting that the root servers might serve other zones without
stipulating specifics?