Last Call Review of draft-housley-sow-author-statistics-00
review-housley-sow-author-statistics-00-opsdir-lc-brownlee-2015-09-30-00

Request Review of draft-housley-sow-author-statistics
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 01)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2015-09-23
Requested 2015-09-01
Authors Russ Housley
Draft last updated 2015-09-30
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -00 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -01 by Joel Halpern
Secdir Last Call review of -00 by Brian Weis (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -00 by Nevil Brownlee (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Nevil Brownlee
State Completed
Review review-housley-sow-author-statistics-00-opsdir-lc-brownlee-2015-09-30
Reviewed rev. 00 (document currently at 01)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2015-09-30

Review
review-housley-sow-author-statistics-00-opsdir-lc-brownlee-2015-09-30

Hi all:

I have performed an Operations Directorate review of
   draft-housley-sow-author-statistics-00

  "This is the Statement of Work (SOW) for extensions to the IETF
   Datatracker to provide statistics about RFCs and Internet-Drafts
   and their authors."

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This is a straightforward and clear draft setting out what needs to be
done to produce data about IETF activities.  It specifies the the data
to be used (information from RFCs and IETF meetings), the statistics
required, and make it possible to observe trends in the statistics.

Section 2, Purpose, explains _why_ we need this information, using
"trying to increase the diversity of (IETF) participants" as an
example.

Overall a good document, fit for its intended purpose, and ready for
publication.

Two tiny typos:
  s3.4  s/been useful provide/been useful to provide/
  s6    s/tools analyzes the documents/tools analyze the documents/


Cheers, Nevil
Ex Co-chair, EMAN WG (now closed)
Ex Co-chair, IPFIX WG (now closed)

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