Last Call Review of draft-housley-id-sig-update-02
review-housley-id-sig-update-02-genart-lc-dupont-2018-01-02-00
| Request | Review of | draft-housley-id-sig-update |
|---|---|---|
| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 03) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2018-01-02 | |
| Requested | 2017-12-05 | |
| Draft last updated | 2018-01-02 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -02 by Francis Dupont
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Opsdir Last Call review of -02 by Tianran Zhou (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -02 by Rifaat Shekh-Yusef (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Francis Dupont |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-housley-id-sig-update-02-genart-lc-dupont-2018-01-02 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 02 (document currently at 03) | |
| Review result | Ready | |
| Review completed: | 2018-01-02 |
Review
review-housley-id-sig-update-02-genart-lc-dupont-2018-01-02
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-housley-id-sig-update-02.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20171221 IETF LC End Date: 20180102 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and 10 page 8: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 1.1 page 3: I suggest to update RFC 2119 by RFC 8179 Note both comments can be addressed by the RFC Editor. Happy New Year! Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr