Early Review of draft-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts-04
review-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts-04-opsdir-early-hares-2013-12-19-00

Request Review of draft-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Early Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2013-12-19
Requested 2013-12-19
Authors Paul Hethmon, Robert McMurray
Draft last updated 2013-12-19
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -03 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -04 by Susan Hares (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Susan Hares
State Completed
Review review-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts-04-opsdir-early-hares-2013-12-19
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 05)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2013-12-19

Review
review-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts-04-opsdir-early-hares-2013-12-19

Resending to ops-dir. 

 

From:

 Susan Hares [mailto:shares at ndzh.com] 

Sent:

 Wednesday, December 18, 2013 6:57 PM

To:

 'draft-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts at tools.ietf.org'

Cc:

 'draft-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts at tools.ietf.org'

Subject:

 draft-hetmon-mcmuraay-ftpext-ftp-hosts-04 

 

Ops-dir and authors: 

 

This is an ops-dir review of your document.  I am your designated reviewer.

 

Reviewer: Susan Hares (

shares at ndzh.com

) 

Status: Ready for publication 

Editorial Comments: Excellently written.  English is clear. State diagrams consistent, and appendices provide useful alternatives so that developers can aid. 

 

Technical comments: For this technology one can only say Wonderful!  At last we get rid of some of the ftp limitations. 

 

IANA section: Clear and provides good context for IANA.

 

Sue Hares 

shares at ndzh.com