Last Call Review of draft-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion-06
review-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion-05-genart-lc-bryant-2017-01-28-02

Request Review of draft-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-02-21
Requested 2017-01-24
Authors Ted Hardie
Draft last updated 2017-03-03
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Ron Bonica (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -05 by Michael Tüxen (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -07 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Stewart Bryant
State Completed
Review review-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion-05-genart-lc-bryant-2017-01-28
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2017-03-03

Review
review-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion-05-genart-lc-bryant-2017-01-28

Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion-06
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2017-03-03
IETF LC End Date: 2017-02-21
IESG Telechat date: 2017-03-16

Summary:  This is a well written document with two very minor nits.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 

1.  Introduction
....
   exploited in the attacks document in [RFC7258] and the threats
s/document/documented/

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EDNS0 ought to be expanded.