Last Call Review of draft-davis-t-langtag-ext-
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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2011-11-26
Requested 2011-11-01
Draft last updated 2011-11-17
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Assignment Reviewer Vijay Gurbani
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Review completed: 2011-11-17

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Document: draft-davis-t-langtag-ext-06
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Nov-17-2011
IETF LC End Date: Unknown
IESG Telechat date: Dec-01-2011

Summary: This draft is ready as an Informational.

Major issues: 0
Minor issues: 0
Nits/editorial comments: 1

Nits:

- For sake of uniformity, I would suggest wrapping the unadorned
 t with single quotes.  For instance, in S2.1, third paragraph:

 s/The t extension is/The 't' extension is/

 The above is the only unadorned instance I found, but there may
 be others that I did not check for.

Thanks,

- vijay
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Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent
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