Telechat Review of draft-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock-06
review-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock-06-secdir-telechat-mandelberg-2017-09-28-00

Request Review of draft-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Telechat Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2017-09-26
Requested 2017-09-13
Authors Michael Bäuerle
Draft last updated 2017-09-28
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by David Mandelberg (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -06 by David Mandelberg (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -06 by Joel Jaeggli (diff)
Assignment Reviewer David Mandelberg
State Completed
Review review-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock-06-secdir-telechat-mandelberg-2017-09-28
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 09)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2017-09-28

Review
review-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock-06-secdir-telechat-mandelberg-2017-09-28

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the  security
area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat  these
comments just like any other last call comments.

The summary of the review is Ready with nits.

Thanks for addressing almost all of the comments from my previous 
review, the changes in the document look good. I had one comment before 
(also, below) that I didn't see addressed (sorry if I missed it). Since 
I really don't know what the numbers should be, it's just a nit.

Section 7 says "the key size used should be at least 128 bit with 
"sha256" for <scheme> and at least 80 bit with "sha1" for <scheme>." 
Those key sizes seem rather low to me, but I don't know exactly what 
they should be.

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