Definitions of Managed Objects for Mapping of Address and Port with Encapsulation (MAP-E)
draft-ietf-softwire-map-mib-13

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 12 and is now closed.

Alvaro Retana No Objection

Benjamin Kaduk No Objection

Comment (2018-05-18 for -12)
No email
send info
Please expand "Customer Edge (CE)" on first use.

Martin Vigoureux No Objection

Warren Kumari No Objection

Comment (2018-05-22 for -12)
No email
send info
The obvious next comment is "Where is the YANG module?!" :-)

(Terry Manderson; former steering group member) Yes

Yes ( for -12)
No email
send info

(Adam Roach; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection (2018-05-21 for -12)
No email
send info
Thank you for a clearly written document. I have some very editorial corrections
to suggest.

---------------------------------------------------------------------------

§4.1.2:

>  invalid packets that have been identified.  There are two kind of

"...two kinds..."

>  - The Border Relay (BR) will validates the received packet's source

"...will validate..."

---------------------------------------------------------------------------

§5:

>      DESCRIPTION
>          "Indicates that the PSID is represented as hexidecimal for
>           clarity."

"...hexadecimal..."
       ^

(Alexey Melnikov; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ( for -12)
No email
send info

(Alissa Cooper; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ( for -12)
No email
send info

(Ben Campbell; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection (2018-05-23 for -12)
No email
send info
Please consider using the boilerplate from RFC 8174 rather than 2119. There are some lower case instances of normative keywords.

(Deborah Brungard; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ( for -12)
No email
send info

(Eric Rescorla; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ( for -12)
No email
send info

(Ignas Bagdonas; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection (2018-05-24 for -12)
No email
send info
A nit - maybe adding a paragraph mentioning that from manageability perspective this document specifies only a subset of what corresponding YANG module defined in I-D softwire-yang provides would be suitable.

(Mirja Kühlewind; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ( for -12)
No email
send info

(Spencer Dawkins; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ( for -12)
No email
send info

(Suresh Krishnan; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ( for -12)
No email
send info