Policy Quality of Service (QoS) Information Model
draft-ietf-policy-qos-info-model-05
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2003-08-29
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05 | Natalia Syracuse | State Changes to RFC Ed Queue from Approved-announcement sent by Natalia Syracuse |
2003-08-26
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05 | Amy Vezza | IESG state changed to Approved-announcement sent |
2003-08-26
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05 | Amy Vezza | IESG has approved the document |
2003-08-26
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05 | Amy Vezza | Closed "Approve" ballot |
2003-08-22
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05 | Bert Wijnen | State Changes to Approved-announcement to be sent from IESG Evaluation by Bert Wijnen |
2003-08-21
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05 | Bert Wijnen | State Changes to IESG Evaluation from IESG Evaluation::AD Followup by Bert Wijnen |
2003-08-21
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Russ and WG chairs agreed on the RFC-Editor note to replace the text in the abstract, and the document is now ready for approval announcement. |
2003-08-21
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Status date has been changed to 2003-08-20 from 2003-08-08 |
2003-08-11
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05 | Michael Lee | Removed from agenda for telechat - 2003-08-07 by Michael Lee |
2003-08-08
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Document now basically approved with following RFC-Editor Note. Checking with chairs/authors and a few ADs. RFC-Editor Note: Please replace th abstract with this new text: … Document now basically approved with following RFC-Editor Note. Checking with chairs/authors and a few ADs. RFC-Editor Note: Please replace th abstract with this new text: Abstract This document presents an object-oriented information model for representing QoS network management policies. This document is based on the IETF Policy Core Information Model and its extensions. It defines an information model for QoS enforcement for differentiated and integrated services using policy. It is important to note that this document defines an information model, which by definition is independent of any particular data storage mechanism and access protocol. |
2003-08-08
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Status date has been changed to 2003-08-08 from 2003-08-01 |
2003-08-07
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05 | Amy Vezza | State Changes to IESG Evaluation::AD Followup from IESG Evaluation - Defer by Amy Vezza |
2003-08-04
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05 | (System) | [Ballot Position Update] Position for Russ Housley has been changed to Discuss from No Record |
2003-08-04
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05 | (System) | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Jon Peterson |
2003-08-04
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05 | (System) | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Ted Hardie |
2003-08-04
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05 | (System) | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Alex Zinin |
2003-08-04
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05 | (System) | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Bill Fenner |
2003-08-04
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05 | (System) | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Ned Freed |
2003-08-04
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05 | (System) | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Abstain, has been recorded for Steven Bellovin |
2003-08-04
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05 | (System) | [Ballot Position Update] New position, Yes, has been recorded for Bert Wijnen |
2003-08-04
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05 | (System) | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Thomas Narten |
2003-08-04
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05 | (System) | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Allison Mankin |
2003-08-04
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05 | (System) | [Ballot Position Update] New position, No Objection, has been recorded for Harald Alvestrand |
2003-08-04
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05 | (System) | Ballot has been issued |
2003-08-04
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05 | Russ Housley | [Ballot discuss] The first paragraph of the Introduction indicates that the QPIM includes a standard framework for controlling access to network QoS resources. Yet, I … [Ballot discuss] The first paragraph of the Introduction indicates that the QPIM includes a standard framework for controlling access to network QoS resources. Yet, I do not find any discussion of authentication, authorization, or access control. The discussion of admission control actions is not sufficient to meet fulfill the expectation of the Introduction. At a minimum, acc |
2003-08-04
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05 | Russ Housley | Created "Approve" ballot |
2003-08-04
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05 | (System) | Ballot writeup text was added |
2003-08-04
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05 | (System) | Last call text was added |
2003-08-04
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05 | (System) | Ballot approval text was added |
2003-08-01
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Placed on agenda for telechat - 2003-07-10 by Bert Wijnen |
2003-08-01
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Status date has been changed to 2003-08-01 from 2003-07-03 |
2003-07-10
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05 | Amy Vezza | State Changes to IESG Evaluation - Defer from IESG Evaluation by Vezza, Amy |
2003-07-03
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05 | Bert Wijnen | No comments were received during IETF Last Call. Document is now on IESG agenda for July 10th. |
2003-07-03
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05 | Bert Wijnen | State Changes to IESG Evaluation from Waiting for AD Go-Ahead by Wijnen, Bert |
2003-07-03
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05 | Bert Wijnen | State Changes to Waiting for AD Go-Ahead from Waiting for Writeup by Wijnen, Bert |
2003-07-03
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Status date has been changed to 2003-07-03 from 2003-06-17 |
2003-07-03
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05 | Bert Wijnen | State Changes to Waiting for Writeup from In Last Call by Wijnen, Bert |
2003-06-03
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05 | Amy Vezza | Status date has been changed to 2003-06-17 from 2003-06-02 |
2003-06-03
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05 | Amy Vezza | State Changes to In Last Call from Last Call Requested by Vezza, Amy |
2003-06-03
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Last Call request sent to iesg-secretariat via email as well |
2003-06-03
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Status date has been changed to 2003-06-02 from 2003-05-21 |
2003-06-03
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05 | (System) | Last call sent |
2003-05-21
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Revision 5 addresses my comments. Two nits left that can be handled later. -----Original Message----- From: Wijnen, Bert (Bert) [mailto:bwijnen@lucent.com] Sent: dinsdag 20 … Revision 5 addresses my comments. Two nits left that can be handled later. -----Original Message----- From: Wijnen, Bert (Bert) [mailto:bwijnen@lucent.com] Sent: dinsdag 20 mei 2003 15:03 To: Joel M. Halpern; policy@ietf.org Subject: RE: [Policy] Revised Draft Mmm.. on page 46 and following I see afew FALSEFALSE values. Is that correct? If not, then you can keep that to be fixed at a later point. Same for [DIFF-MIB] Refernce, it should refernece RFC3289 For those who want to see the I-Ds with colored changes, See http://psg.com/~bwijnen/qpim.html Is the doc ready for me to send it into IETF Last Call? Thanks, Bert |
2003-05-21
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Status date has been changed to 2003-05-21 from 2003-05-06 |
2003-05-21
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05 | Bert Wijnen | State Changes to Last Call Requested from AD Evaluation :: Revised ID Needed by Wijnen, Bert |
2003-05-07
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Bob Moore promised to post a new revision on May 6th. |
2003-05-07
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Status date has been changed to 2003-05-06 from 2003-04-04 |
2003-05-07
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05 | Bert Wijnen | State Changes to AD Evaluation :: Revised ID Needed from AD Evaluation by Wijnen, Bert |
2003-05-06
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05 | (System) | New version available: draft-ietf-policy-qos-info-model-05.txt |
2003-04-04
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05 | Bert Wijnen | My comments can also be ahndled after IETF Last Call. Checking with Authors and WG chairs if they want to go that path or if … My comments can also be ahndled after IETF Last Call. Checking with Authors and WG chairs if they want to go that path or if they rather do a new rev now. |
2003-04-04
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Status date has been changed to 2003-04-04 from 2002-05-06 |
2003-04-04
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05 | Bert Wijnen | AD review comments: -----Original Message----- From: Wijnen, Bert (Bert) Sent: vrijdag 4 april 2003 14:15 To: Policy (E-mail) Subject: AD review for: draft-ietf-policy-qos-info-model-04.txt Finally... and … AD review comments: -----Original Message----- From: Wijnen, Bert (Bert) Sent: vrijdag 4 april 2003 14:15 To: Policy (E-mail) Subject: AD review for: draft-ietf-policy-qos-info-model-04.txt Finally... and (too) long overdue. I feel ashamed :-( Oh well... here we go. I believe they are just nits, and I am willing to consider them as input to the IETF Last Call, so that all editorial changes can be made after the Last Call. Authors and WG chairs, let me know if you want to do it that way or if your rather do another rev rigth away. - The abstract should not contain any citations, see See: http://www.rfc-editor.org/policy.html - References must be split in normative and informative See: http://www.rfc-editor.org/policy.html - In general, you may want to check and make sure that you expand an acronym the first time it is used in the document. See: http://www.rfc-editor.org/policy.html - Last sentence of 1st para of sect 1.2.4 s/amethodology/methodology/ - 2nd para in sect 1.2.5 s/the QPIM standard/the QPIM specification/ I don't think the text should assume it is a standard. Standard attribute/level gets assigned separately. - Page 42 I see: PROPERTIES Antecedent[ref QoSPolicyAdmissionAction [0..n]] Dependent[ref QoSPolicyTrfcProf [1..1]] And then a bit later I see a few times QoSPolicyTrfcProfile Should that be QoSPolicyTrfcProf ?? - I see: ABSTRACT FALSE But I also see: ABSTRACT False And same for the case of TRUE/True (I believe). Would it not be better to be consistent. In the original RFC3060 we were consistent using Upper Case In the PCIMe (RFC3460) we unfortunatly also are not consistent. What a pitty - I see also inconsistent use of Upper/Mixed case in sect 8.5.1: NAME qpRSVPWarnOnly SYNTAX Boolean Default False VALUE The value TRUE means that the request should be admitted AND an RSVP warning message should be sent to the originator. The value of FALSE means that the request should be not admitted and an appropriate error message should be sent back to the originator of the request. - I see reference to [RSVP-PREEMPT], but it is not listed in the references section - I see a reference to [COPS] but I do not see it in the references section - I see page 39: 12. QoSPolicyRSVPMessageTypeVariable - The RSVP message type, either Path, Resv, PathErr or ResvErr [RSVP]. And on page 63 ALLOWED VALUE TYPES: Integer (An enumerated value of {PATH=1 , PATHTEAR=2, RESV=3, RESVTEAR=4, ResvErr=5, CONF=6, PATHERR} And similar stuff on other pages. Would it not be good to be consistent in using Upper/Mixed case? - I am missing an IPR statement as per rfc2026 sect 10. You do have it in RFC3460 and RFC3060. - While you are at it, you may want to update some more references in the reference section. Several docs have become RFC by now (my fault, I know). - You may also want to check for references that have been obsoleted by newer RFCs. For example RFC2751/2 have been obsoleted by RFC3181/2. Thanks, Bert |
2002-05-03
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05 | Bert Wijnen | State Changes to AD Evaluation from New Version … State Changes to AD Evaluation from New Version Needed (WG/Author) by Bert Wijnen |
2002-05-03
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05 | Bert Wijnen | State Changes to New Version Needed (WG/Author) from AD Evaluation … State Changes to New Version Needed (WG/Author) from AD Evaluation by Bert Wijnen |
2002-04-29
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Bert needs to check comments from LDAP review |
2002-04-29
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05 | Bert Wijnen | Intended Status has been changed to Proposed Standard from Request |
2002-04-29
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05 | Bert Wijnen | State Changes to AD Evaluation from Requested … State Changes to AD Evaluation from Requested by Bert Wijnen |
2001-11-13
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04 | (System) | New version available: draft-ietf-policy-qos-info-model-04.txt |
2001-04-25
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03 | (System) | New version available: draft-ietf-policy-qos-info-model-03.txt |
2000-11-29
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02 | (System) | New version available: draft-ietf-policy-qos-info-model-02.txt |
2000-05-01
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01 | (System) | New version available: draft-ietf-policy-qos-info-model-01.txt |
2000-03-09
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00 | (System) | New version available: draft-ietf-policy-qos-info-model-00.txt |