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Shepherd writeup
draft-ietf-opsawg-rfc5066bis

As required by RFC 4858, this is the current template for the Document
Shepherd Write-Up.

Changes are expected over time. This version is dated 24 February 2012.

(1) What type of RFC is being requested (BCP, Proposed Standard, Internet
Standard, Informational, Experimental, or Historic)? Why is this the proper
type of RFC? Is this type of RFC indicated in the title page header?

Proposed Standard. The header mentions incorrectly 'Standards Track' - this
needs to be changed

 (2) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document Announcement Write-Up.
 Please provide such a Document Announcement Write-Up. Recent examples can be
 found in the "Action" announcements for approved documents. The approval
 announcement contains the following sections:

Technical Summary:

   This document updates RFC 5066.  It amends that specification by
   informing the internet community about the transition of the EFM-CU-
   MIB module from the concluded IETF Ethernet Interfaces and Hub MIB
   Working Group to the Institute of Electrical and Electronics
   Engineers (IEEE) 802.3 working group. This document provides an updated
   security considerations section for IF-CAP-STACK-MIB

Working Group Summary:

   The document was much simplified during the Working Group discussions,
   and now contains only information about the transfer of the Ethernet
   specific MIB module to the IEEE and describes the fact that the
   IF-CAP-STACK-MIB remains under IETF control.

Document Quality:

   The document does not define a new protocol, but provides information about
   the future of the MIB modules defined in RFC 5066

Personnel:

Dan Romascanu is the Document Shepherd. Benoit Claise is the Responsible Area
Director.

(3) Briefly describe the review of this document that was performed by the
Document Shepherd. If this version of the document is not ready for
publication, please explain why the document is being forwarded to the IESG.

I reviewed the document and I believe that it is ready to be forwarded to the
IESG for publication as Proposed Standard.

(4) Does the document Shepherd have any concerns about the depth or breadth of
the reviews that have been performed?

No.

(5) Do portions of the document need review from a particular or from broader
perspective, e.g., security, operational complexity, AAA, DNS, DHCP, XML, or
internationalization? If so, describe the review that took place.

The IEEE 802.3 Working Group, specifically the IEEE 802.3.1 Task Group chair
reviewed several versions of the document. The document will be referred by the
IEEE 802.3.1 standard.

(6) Describe any specific concerns or issues that the Document Shepherd has
with this document that the Responsible Area Director and/or the IESG should be
aware of? For example, perhaps he or she is uncomfortable with certain parts of
the document, or has concerns whether there really is a need for it. In any
event, if the WG has discussed those issues and has indicated that it still
wishes to advance the document, detail those concerns here.

All issues were resolved during the Working Group discussions and reviews.
There are no concerns left.

(7) Has each author confirmed that any and all appropriate IPR disclosures
required for full conformance with the provisions of BCP 78 and BCP 79 have
already been filed. If not, explain why?

The document describes changes in status of the technical material in RFC 5066
without introducing new technical content. The document editor confirmed the
conformance with the provisions of BCP 78 and BCP 79 at each submission.

(8) Has an IPR disclosure been filed that references this document? If so,
summarize any WG discussion and conclusion regarding the IPR disclosures.

No.

(9) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it represent the
strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or does the
WG as a whole understand and agree with it?

Consensus is solid. The number of contributors is not high, bu they are
representative for the MIB design community.

(10) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent?
If so, please summarise the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the
Responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this
questionnaire is publicly available.)

No.

(11) Identify any ID nits the Document Shepherd has found in this document.
(See http://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ and the Internet-Drafts Checklist).
Boilerplate checks are not enough; this check needs to be thorough.

None.

(12) Describe how the document meets any required formal review criteria, such
as the MIB Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews.

As there is no new MIB module in the document a MIB doctor review as per RFC
4181 is not needed. Sending the IETF Last Call announcement to the MIB Doctors
team and asking for a quick look from people not involved until now with the
document can be useful.

(13) Have all references within this document been identified as either
normative or informative?

Yes.

(14) Are there normative references to documents that are not ready for
advancement or are otherwise in an unclear state? If such normative references
exist, what is the plan for their completion?

No.

(15) Are there downward normative references references (see RFC 3967)? If so,
list these downward references to support the Area Director in the Last Call
procedure.

No.

(16) Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs?
Are those RFCs listed on the title page header, listed in the abstract, and
discussed in the introduction? If the RFCs are not listed in the Abstract and
Introduction, explain why, and point to the part of the document where the
relationship of this document to the other RFCs is discussed. If this
information is not in the document, explain why the WG considers it unnecessary.

The document updates but does not change the status of RFC 5066. This was
discussed by the WG.

(17) Describe the Document Shepherd's review of the IANA considerations
section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the
document. Confirm that all protocol extensions that the document makes are
associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm that
any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm that newly
created IANA registries include a detailed specification of the initial
contents for the registry, that allocations procedures for future registrations
are defined, and a reasonable name for the new registry has been suggested (see
RFC 5226).

The IANA considerations section mentions that no actions are required from IANA.

(18) List any new IANA registries that require Expert Review for future
allocations. Provide any public guidance that the IESG would find useful in
selecting the IANA Experts for these new registries.

N/A

(19) Describe reviews and automated checks performed by the Document Shepherd
to validate sections of the document written in a formal language, such as XML
code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, etc.

N/A
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