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Use of the SHAKE One-Way Hash Functions in the Cryptographic Message Syntax (CMS)
draft-ietf-lamps-cms-shakes-18

Yes

Roman Danyliw

No Objection

(Alissa Cooper)
(Alvaro Retana)
(Barry Leiba)
(Deborah Brungard)
(Martin Vigoureux)
(Mirja Kühlewind)
(Suresh Krishnan)

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 13 and is now closed.

Roman Danyliw
Yes
Warren Kumari
No Objection
Comment (2019-08-07 for -15) Not sent
I also support Alexey's discuss -- should be a  trivial tix though.
Éric Vyncke
No Objection
Comment (2019-08-05 for -15) Sent
Thank you for the work put into this document. I second Alexey's DISCUSS that is easy to fix.

Regards,

-éric

== COMMENTS ==

-- Section 4.1 --

Can you check whether the begin and the end of this section are consistent ? I.e. "id-shake128 and id-shake256 OIDs" vs. "output length of SHA256 or SHAKE256" ? I must admit that my knowledge of crypto is not paramount but I find this weird.

-- Section 4.2.1 --

Is there any reason why length are measured in bytes while in other sections it is in bits? Readers can do the math of course but why making the text more complex to parse?

== NITS ==

-- Section 3 --

Why are some object identifier are fully in lowercase and some are a mix of lower and uppercase characters?
Alexey Melnikov Former IESG member
(was Discuss) No Objection
No Objection (2019-08-08 for -16) Sent for earlier
As per Roman's reply: the document should clarify that values TBD1..TBD4 are defined in another document and should be updated in this draft once the other document gets published.
Alissa Cooper Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection (for -15) Not sent

                            
Alvaro Retana Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection (for -15) Not sent

                            
Barry Leiba Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection (for -15) Not sent

                            
Deborah Brungard Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection (for -15) Not sent

                            
Martin Vigoureux Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection (for -15) Not sent

                            
Mirja Kühlewind Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection (for -15) Not sent

                            
Suresh Krishnan Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection (for -15) Not sent