Shepherd writeup
rfc7497-10

(1) What type of RFC is being requested (BCP, Proposed Standard, Internet 
Standard, Informational, Experimental, or Historic)? Why is this the proper 
type of RFC? Is this type of RFC indicated in the title page header?

Informational

(2) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document Announcement 
Write-Up. Please provide such a Document Announcement Write-Up. Recent 
examples can be found in the "Action" announcements for approved documents. 
The approval announcement contains the following sections:

Technical Summary:

This memo presents an access rate-measurement problem statement for test 
protocols to measure IP Performance Metrics.  The rate measurement scenario 
has wide-spread attention of Internet access subscribers and seemingly all 
industry players, including regulators. Key test protocol aspects require 
the ability to control packet size on the tested path and enable 
asymmetrical packet size testing in a controller-responder architecture.

Working Group Summary:

A controversial topic regards the level of requirement for the capability 
to control asymmetric packet sizes in two-way testing architectures. A few 
participants felt that the document should not require asymmetric packet 
sizes, even though there are a number of cases where it would appear 
asymmetric packets sizes would be essential to measure the path capacity 
accurately.

As a compromise, the author updated the document to require asymmetric 
rate generation, and both symmetric and asymmetric packet sizes are
recommended. The many circumstances where asymmetric packet size testing is 
needed are documented, and many of these circumstances would be unknown 
prior to comparative tests using symmetric and asymmetric packet sizes.

Document Quality:

The draft was reviewed by many members of WG. There are already standards 
track protocol extension proposals that respond to the requirements in 
this draft. At least one protocol solution has been implemented and 
deployed.

Personnel:

The document shepherd is Bill Cerveny. The responsible area director is 
Spencer Dawkins.

(3) Briefly describe the review of this document that was performed by the 
Document Shepherd. If this version of the document is not ready for 
publication, please explain why the document is being forwarded to the IESG.

It is felt that this document is sufficiently ready for publication. The 
document has been a working group document for over two years. There have 
been two working group last calls on this document, and there has been 
considerable discussion and revision over the life of this working group 
Internet-Draft.

(4) Does the document Shepherd have any concerns about the depth or breadth 
of the reviews that have been performed?

No. There have been numerous reviews by the working group participants.

(5) Do portions of the document need review from a particular or from 
broader perspective, e.g., security, operational complexity, AAA, DNS, 
DHCP, XML, or internationalization? If so, describe the review that took 
place.

No

(6) Describe any specific concerns or issues that the Document Shepherd has 
with this document that the Responsible Area Director and/or the IESG 
should be aware of? For example, perhaps he or she is uncomfortable with 
certain parts of the document, or has concerns whether there really is a 
need for it. In any event, if the WG has discussed those issues and has 
indicated that it still wishes to advance the document, detail those 
concerns here.

See "Working Group Summary" above.

(7) Has each author confirmed that any and all appropriate IPR disclosures 
required for full conformance with the provisions of BCP 78 and BCP 79 have 
already been filed. If not, explain why?

There are no IPR disclosures.

(8) Has an IPR disclosure been filed that references this document? If so, 
summarize any WG discussion and conclusion regarding the IPR disclosures.

There are no IPR disclosures

(9) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it represent 
the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or 
does the WG as a whole understand and agree with it?

There exists a rough consensus for moving this document forward. Over the 
life of the working group document, there has been significant discussion.  
There were 3 commenters in the second and last working group last call.

(10) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme 
discontent? If so, please summarise the areas of conflict in separate email 
messages to the Responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate 
email because this questionnaire is publicly available.)

There haven't been any threats of appeals, but the chairs did declare 
rough consensus based on 1-1/2 years of fairly intense working group 
discussion on the point described in the working group summary.

(11) Identify any ID nits the Document Shepherd has found in this document. 
(See http://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ and the Internet-Drafts Checklist). 
Boilerplate checks are not enough; this check needs to be thorough.

idnits 2.13.01 

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     No issues found here.

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     No issues found here.

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     No issues found here.

  Miscellaneous warnings:
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  -- The document date (October 7, 2014) is 34 days in the past.  Is this
     intentional?


  Checking references for intended status: Informational
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  == Outdated reference: A later version (-07) exists of
     draft-ietf-ippm-lmap-path-06


     Summary: 0 errors (**), 0 flaws (~~), 1 warning (==), 1 comment (--).

     Run idnits with the --verbose option for more detailed information about
     the items above.

(12) Describe how the document meets any required formal review criteria, 
such as the MIB Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews.

None necessary.

(13) Have all references within this document been identified as either 
normative or informative?

Yes

(14) Are there normative references to documents that are not ready for 
advancement or are otherwise in an unclear state? If such normative 
references exist, what is the plan for their completion?

No

(15) Are there downward normative references references (see RFC 3967)? If 
so, list these downward references to support the Area Director in the Last 
Call procedure.

No

(16) Will publication of this document change the status of any existing 
RFCs? Are those RFCs listed on the title page header, listed in the 
abstract, and discussed in the introduction? If the RFCs are not listed in 
the Abstract and Introduction, explain why, and point to the part of the 
document where the relationship of this document to the other RFCs is 
discussed. If this information is not in the document, explain why the WG 
considers it unnecessary.

No

(17) Describe the Document Shepherd's review of the IANA considerations 
section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the 
document. Confirm that all protocol extensions that the document makes are 
associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries. Confirm 
that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly identified. Confirm 
that newly created IANA registries include a detailed specification of the 
initial contents for the registry, that allocations procedures for future 
registrations are defined, and a reasonable name for the new registry has 
been suggested (see RFC 5226).

This memo makes no requests of IANA.

(18) List any new IANA registries that require Expert Review for future 
allocations. Provide any public guidance that the IESG would find useful in 
selecting the IANA Experts for these new registries.

This memo makes no requests of IANA.

(19) Describe reviews and automated checks performed by the Document 
Shepherd to validate sections of the document written in a formal language, 
such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, etc.

None necessary.
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