Shepherd writeup
rfc8561-13

> As required by RFC 4858, this is the current template for the Document 
> Shepherd Write-Up.
> 
> Changes are expected over time. This version is dated 24 February 2012.
> 
> (1) What type of RFC is being requested (BCP, Proposed Standard,
> Internet Standard, Informational, Experimental, or Historic)?

Standards Track

> Why is this the proper type of RFC?
It contains a new YANG model and has impact on other on-wire behavior. 

>Is this type of RFC indicated in the
> title page header?
Yes

>
> (2) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document Announcement
> Write-Up. Please provide such a Document Announcement Write-Up. Recent
> examples can be found in the "Action" announcements for approved
> documents. The approval announcement contains the following sections:
> 
> Technical Summary
> 
>   Relevant content can frequently be found in the abstract 
>   and/or introduction of the document. If not, this may be 
>   an indication that there are deficiencies in the abstract 
>   or introduction.
>
   This document defines a YANG data model for control and management of
   the radio link interfaces, and their connectivity to packet
   (typically Ethernet) interfaces in a microwave/millimeter wave node. 
  

> Working Group Summary
> 
>   Was there anything in WG process that is worth noting? For 
>   example, was there controversy about particular points or 
>   were there decisions where the consensus was particularly 
>   rough?

This work has occupied good attention and has been discussed deeply within the WG.

> 
> Document Quality
> 
>   Are there existing implementations of the protocol? Have a 
>   significant number of vendors indicated their plan to 
>   implement the specification?

The model was implemented in IETF 99 Hackathon with joint effort from mulitple vendors. 

> Are there any reviewers that 
>   merit special mention as having done a thorough review, 
>   e.g., one that resulted in important changes or a 
>   conclusion that the document had no substantive issues? If 
>   there was a MIB Doctor, Media Type or other expert review, 
>   what was its course (briefly)? In the case of a Media Type 
>   review, on what date was the request posted?
>

There has been reasonable discusson on list about the document both
before and as part of LC.  A YANG Doctor review has been conducted per
normal process.

> Personnel
> 
>   Who is the Document Shepherd?

Fatai Zhang

> Who is the Responsible Area  Director?
>

Deborah Brungard

> (3) Briefly describe the review of this document that was performed by
> the Document Shepherd.  If this version of the document is not ready
> for publication, please explain why the document is being forwarded to
> the IESG.

I reviewed the document both as it was progressing and in it's final
form.  I also checked the output Yang Validation (via data tracker) 
returned no errors, and ID nits returned no errors and no flaws. 

> 
> (4) Does the document Shepherd have any concerns about the depth or
> breadth of the reviews that have been performed?
>

No

> 
> 
> (5) Do portions of the document need review from a particular or from
> broader perspective, e.g., security, operational complexity, AAA, DNS,
> DHCP, XML, or internationalization? If so, describe the review that
> took place.
>

Only the YANG Docotor review, which has been completed.


> (6) Describe any specific concerns or issues that the Document Shepherd
> has with this document that the Responsible Area Director and/or the
> IESG should be aware of? For example, perhaps he or she is uncomfortable
> with certain parts of the document, or has concerns whether there really
> is a need for it. In any event, if the WG has discussed those issues and
> has indicated that it still wishes to advance the document, detail those
> concerns here.

No

> 
> (7) Has each author confirmed that any and all appropriate IPR
> disclosures required for full conformance with the provisions of BCP 78
> and BCP 79 have already been filed. If not, explain why.

Yes.

> 
> (8) Has an IPR disclosure been filed that references this document?
> If so, summarize any WG discussion and conclusion regarding the IPR
> disclosures.
>
No.

> (9) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it 
> represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others
> being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and agree with it?   

Generally solid, with a reasonable number being interested in and
reviewing this work. No objections. 

> 
> (10) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme 
> discontent? If so, please summarise the areas of conflict in separate
> email messages to the Responsible Area Director. (It should be in a
> separate email because this questionnaire is publicly available.) 
>
No.

> (11) Identify any ID nits the Document Shepherd has found in this
> document. (See https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ and the Internet-Drafts
> Checklist). Boilerplate checks are not enough; this check needs to be
> thorough.

ID nits passed. 

> 
> (12) Describe how the document meets any required formal review
> criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews.
>
See above WRT YANG Doctors (review requested per process.)

> (13) Have all references within this document been identified as
> either normative or informative?

Yes.

> 
> (14) Are there normative references to documents that are not ready for
> advancement or are otherwise in an unclear state? If such normative
> references exist, what is the plan for their completion?

No.

> 
> (15) Are there downward normative references references (see RFC 3967)?
> If so, list these downward references to support the Area Director in 
> the Last Call procedure.

The draft use a few non-IETF standards as normative reference. I will ask 
the authors to correct on that. 

> 
> (16) Will publication of this document change the status of any
> existing RFCs?

No.

> Are those RFCs listed on the title page header, listed
> in the abstract, and discussed in the introduction?

N/A

> If the RFCs are not
> listed in the Abstract and Introduction, explain why, and point to the
> part of the document where the relationship of this document to the
> other RFCs is discussed. If this information is not in the document,
> explain why the WG considers it unnecessary.

N/A

> 
> 
> (17) Describe the Document Shepherd's review of the IANA considerations
> section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the
> document. Confirm that all protocol extensions that the document makes
> are associated with the appropriate reservations in IANA registries.
> Confirm that any referenced IANA registries have been clearly
> identified. Confirm that newly created IANA registries include a
> detailed specification of the initial contents for the registry, that
> allocations procedures for future registrations are defined, and a
> reasonable name for the new registry has been suggested (see RFC 5226).
>
For ietf-microwave-radio-link, ietf-interface-protection and ietf-microwave-types, the IANA 
section is consistent and matches the general form recommended in 
RFC6087bis. 

> (18) List any new IANA registries that require Expert Review for future
> allocations. Provide any public guidance that the IESG would find
> useful in selecting the IANA Experts for these new registries.
>
None.

> (19) Describe reviews and automated checks performed by the Document
> Shepherd to validate sections of the document written in a formal
> language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, etc.
> 

I checked the output of Yang Validation (via data tracker) and online
ID nits.
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