Path Computation Element
charter-ietf-pce-08

Yes

John Scudder
(Andrew Alston)

No Objection

Erik Kline
Francesca Palombini
Jim Guichard
Murray Kucherawy
Paul Wouters
Zaheduzzaman Sarker
Éric Vyncke
(Lars Eggert)
(Martin Duke)
(Robert Wilton)

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 07-04 and is now closed.

Ballot question: "Do we approve of this charter?"

John Scudder
Yes
Erik Kline
No Objection
Francesca Palombini
No Objection
Jim Guichard
No Objection
Murray Kucherawy
No Objection
Paul Wouters
No Objection
Zaheduzzaman Sarker
No Objection
Éric Vyncke
No Objection
Comment (2023-12-14 for -07-04) Sent 
After re-reading the proposed charter for the n+1 time, some more comments:

1) the first paragraph would benefit by directly stating that it is about MPLS, SR, BIER, Detnet... rather than adding a 2nd sentence "Further, the PCE WG ...."

2) in the same vein, the 2nd paragraph is only about (G)MPLS with terms like LSR and LSP.

3) in the last two bullets: what is the difference between "in cooperation" and "in *close* cooperation" ?

4) as written in my previous review, it would be clearer if the work items are directly qualified with 'standard tracks' or if 'specification' was used rather than 'definition'
Andrew Alston Former IESG member
Yes
Yes (for -07-04) Not sent 

                            

                        
                    

                
            
        
            
                
            
                
            
                
            
                
            
                
            
                
            
                
            
                
                    

                        

                            Lars Eggert Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
                            No Objection
                            
                        

                    

                    

                        

                            

                                No Objection 
                                
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# GEN AD review of charter-ietf-pce-07-04

CC @larseggert

## Comments

### Inclusive language

Found terminology that should be reviewed for inclusivity; see
https://www.rfc-editor.org/part2/#inclusive_language for background and more
guidance:

 * Term `native`; alternatives might be `built-in`, `fundamental`, `ingrained`,
   `intrinsic`, `original`

## Notes

This review is in the ["IETF Comments" Markdown format][ICMF], You can use the
[`ietf-comments` tool][ICT] to automatically convert this review into
individual GitHub issues. Review generated by the [`ietf-reviewtool`][IRT].

[ICMF]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md
[ICT]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments
[IRT]: https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool

                            

                        
                    

                
            
                
                    

                        

                            Martin Duke Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
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                            Robert Wilton Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
                            No Objection
                            
                        

                    

                    

                        

                            

                                No Objection 
                                
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