Last Call Review of draft-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-02
review-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-02-genart-lc-even-2017-10-16-00

Request Review of draft-schaad-curdle-oid-registry
Requested rev. no specific revision
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-10-23
Requested 2017-10-09
Other Reviews Secdir Last Call review of -02 by Tero Kivinen
Review State Completed
Reviewer Roni Even
Review review-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-02-genart-lc-even-2017-10-16
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/ZsE2eanQoDIKgyh3RhhLPKsrdG0
Reviewed rev. 02
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2017-10-16
Review completed: 2017-10-16

Review
review-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-02-genart-lc-even-2017-10-16

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Document: draft-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2017-10-16
IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-23
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: The document is ready for publication with nits as an Informational RFC

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: 

1. Add a sentence to the RFC editor to remove the "Contributing to this document " section
2. The document is missing a table of content
3. In the acknowledgment section the sentence "This document stole  text heavily from a previous document doing
   similar thing by Russ Housely" is not clear, do you hint that Russ also stole?  I think better wording "This document uses a lot of text from a similar document  by Russ Housely"