Last Call Review of draft-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-02
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Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2017-10-16
IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-23
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
Summary: The document is ready for publication with nits as an Informational RFC
1. Add a sentence to the RFC editor to remove the "Contributing to this document " section
2. The document is missing a table of content
3. In the acknowledgment section the sentence "This document stole text heavily from a previous document doing
similar thing by Russ Housely" is not clear, do you hint that Russ also stole? I think better wording "This document uses a lot of text from a similar document by Russ Housely"