Telechat Review of draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcweb-rtcp-xr-metrics-09
|Requested rev.||no specific revision (document currently at 10)|
|Team||General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)|
|Draft last updated||2018-05-01|
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Robert Sparks
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Brian Weis (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Robert Sparks (diff)
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcweb-rtcp-xr-metrics-09 Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review Date: 2018-05-01 IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-23 IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-24 Summary: Ready for publication as an Informational RFC, but with nits to consider before publication Note that this is identical to my last call review, which I don't think I've seen a response to. The document argues to include things in the W3C statistics API in the last paragraph of 5.2.2. Section 7 seems to say those have been included already. It would be good to rework both of these mentions to reflect what's true at the time of the publication of the RFC, in a way that the text will make sense when read years from now.