Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-le-phb-08
review-ietf-tsvwg-le-phb-08-genart-lc-carpenter-2019-02-01-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-le-phb
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-02-12
Requested 2019-01-29
Other Reviews Tsvart Last Call review of -08 by Olivier Bonaventure (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Kyle Rose (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Brian Carpenter
Review review-ietf-tsvwg-le-phb-08-genart-lc-carpenter-2019-02-01
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/0GGMXaF2FSQIXD0LC6cK20oADo4
Reviewed rev. 08 (document currently at 09)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2019-02-01
Review completed: 2019-02-01

Review
review-ietf-tsvwg-le-phb-08-genart-lc-carpenter-2019-02-01

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Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-le-phb-08
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2019-02-01
IETF LC End Date: 2019-02-12
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready

Nits/editorial comments:  Shepherd and AD, please note that this draft formally updates draft-ietf-tsvwg-rtcweb-qos, which is approved but waiting in the MISSREF state. That probably merits a note to the RFC Editor in due course.