Early Review of draft-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-04
review-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-04-rtgdir-early-pignataro-2017-03-23-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Early Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2017-03-21
Requested 2017-03-06
Requested by Susan Hares
Other Reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Shwetha Bhandari (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Stephen Farrell (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -08 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Comments
This draft has not had a QA review, and it has passed WG LC.   Please do a QA/WG LC review.
Review State Completed
Reviewer Carlos Pignataro
Review review-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-04-rtgdir-early-pignataro-2017-03-23
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/Sz_Ns28HuIaEVOJzvoLFoKG6xnU
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 09)
Review result Has Nits
Draft last updated 2017-03-23
Review completed: 2017-03-23

Review
review-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-04-rtgdir-early-pignataro-2017-03-23

Hi,

This is a short yet well written document. Looks really good. Just a couple of small questions/comments:

1. It's not clear exactly what from RFC 7175 is being updated by Section 4. This is based on the last paragraph of the Intro, yet Section 5 also seems relevant to that update.
2. In the IANA COnsiderations, it would be useful to explicitly list that the "RBridge Channel Protocols" registry is part of the "Transparent Interconnection of Lots of Links (TRILL) Parameters" 

Thanks,

Carlos Pignataro.