Last Call Review of draft-ietf-teas-actn-info-model-08
review-ietf-teas-actn-info-model-08-opsdir-lc-wang-2018-06-11-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-teas-actn-info-model
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-06-15
Requested 2018-06-01
Other Reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -07 by Eric Gray (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Roman Danyliw (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Zitao Wang
Review review-ietf-teas-actn-info-model-08-opsdir-lc-wang-2018-06-11
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/uXmiOnd4ezH6J5s2ffg6zMXjPMw
Reviewed rev. 08 (document currently at 10)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2018-06-11
Review completed: 2018-06-11

Review
review-ietf-teas-actn-info-model-08-opsdir-lc-wang-2018-06-11

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate’s ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Document reviewed:  draft-ietf-teas-actn-info-model-08

Summary:

This draft provides an information model for Abstraction and Control of Traffic Engineered Networks (ACTN).