Telechat Review of draft-ietf-stir-rph-03
|Requested rev.||no specific revision (document currently at 06)|
|Team||General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)|
|Draft last updated||2018-04-02|
Secdir Telechat review of -03 by Christian Huitema
Genart Telechat review of -03 by Brian Carpenter (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Tim Chown (diff)
Gen-ART *Last Call* review of draft-ietf-stir-rph-03 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-stir-rph-03.txt Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review Date: 2018-04-03 IETF LC End Date: 2018-04-06 IESG Telechat date: 2018-04-19 Summary: Ready -------- Comments: --------- This is a well written draft and I have no technical comments. The draft says it extends RFC8225. Some people would say that needs an Updates: 8225 header. Nits: ----- 8.1. Normative References [I-D.ietf-stir-passport] Wendt, C. and J. Peterson, "Personal Assertion Token (PASSporT)", February 2017. Is now RFC8225. [I-D.ietf-stir-rfc4474bis] Peterson, J., Jennings, C., Rescorla, E., and C. Wendt, "Authenticated Identity Management in the Session Initiation Protocol (SIP)", February 2017. Is now RFC8224.