Telechat Review of draft-ietf-rmcat-sbd-10
review-ietf-rmcat-sbd-10-secdir-telechat-ladd-2018-03-01-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-rmcat-sbd
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Telechat Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2018-03-06
Requested 2018-02-07
Other Reviews Genart Last Call review of -10 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Watson Ladd
Review review-ietf-rmcat-sbd-10-secdir-telechat-ladd-2018-03-01
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/g6HxtBNOYFc-rX8bDduR6we0FxU
Reviewed rev. 10 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2018-03-01
Review completed: 2018-03-01

Review
review-ietf-rmcat-sbd-10-secdir-telechat-ladd-2018-03-01

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments. The summary of
the review is READY.

I am unqualified to weigh in on the heavy networking aspects of this
draft, but I nevertheless found it approachable and understandable. My
one minor editorial comment is that the section with parameters
describes the effects, but never describes what the parameters are.

Sincerely,
Watson