Last Call Review of draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-09
review-ietf-regext-org-ext-09-genart-lc-arkko-2018-09-27-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-regext-org-ext
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-10-08
Requested 2018-09-24
Other Reviews Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Leif Johansson (diff)
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Review State Completed
Reviewer Jari Arkko
Review review-ietf-regext-org-ext-09-genart-lc-arkko-2018-09-27
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/1MLjw6MQEiCv4gPlw1k-k9dlvUk
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2018-09-27
Review completed: 2018-09-27

Review
review-ietf-regext-org-ext-09-genart-lc-arkko-2018-09-27

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Document: draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-09
Reviewer: Jari Arkko
Review Date: 2018-09-27
IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-08
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

While not being a DNS, EPP, or XML expert :-) I have reviewed this document and found it to be clear and reasonable. I have no issues. And I was happy to see some implementations in the implementation report at the end.

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