Last Call Review of draft-ietf-regext-allocation-token-08
review-ietf-regext-allocation-token-08-opsdir-lc-morton-2018-07-23-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-regext-allocation-token
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-08-03
Requested 2018-07-14
Other Reviews Secdir Last Call review of -08 by David Mandelberg (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -09 by Peter Yee
Review State Completed
Reviewer Al Morton
Review review-ietf-regext-allocation-token-08-opsdir-lc-morton-2018-07-23
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/nvRsJUU9jAiEDWy7_goCvxgp_J0
Reviewed rev. 08 (document currently at 09)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2018-07-23
Review completed: 2018-07-23

Review
review-ietf-regext-allocation-token-08-opsdir-lc-morton-2018-07-23

From and operations perspective, this draft proposes a useful extension of EPP in https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5730
and presents the new Allocation Token in  a well organized way,  with clarity and examples.
The shepherd's write-up indicates many reviews, with reasonable and continuous development pace.
There are several implementations of server, client and both sides, and a thoughtful list of security considerations.

Nits:
Section 1.1, Conventions 
Please update RFC2119 Requirements Language with latest/clarified text from:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc8174