Telechat Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-20
review-ietf-opsawg-mud-20-opsdir-telechat-bradner-2018-04-10-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud
Requested rev. no specific revision
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-04-17
Requested 2018-03-13
Other Reviews Secdir Early review of -08 by Adam Montville (diff)
Genart Early review of -08 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Iotdir Early review of -08 by Henk Birkholz (diff)
Yangdoctors Early review of -08 by Martin Bjorklund (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -13 by Adrian Farrel (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -13 by Adam Montville (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -20 by Robert Sparks
Review State Completed
Reviewer Scott Bradner
Review review-ietf-opsawg-mud-20-opsdir-telechat-bradner-2018-04-10
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/HLKQnEZDJmoaKnk52yJjbRmpYEs
Reviewed rev. 20
Review result Has Nits
Draft last updated 2018-04-10
Review completed: 2018-04-10

Review
review-ietf-opsawg-mud-20-opsdir-telechat-bradner-2018-04-10

I did an OPS-DIR review of Manufacturer Usage Description Specification < draft-ietf-opsawg-mud >
The specification is well written and clear (I also agree with Robert Spark's nits).

One suggestion about document organization: I would either move the discussion of what should be done if the MUD controller can not retrieve the MUD file for some reason or another out of the security considerations section to after section 1.9 or at least include a forward pointer to the discussion.