Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-enhanced-dsmap-
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.
This document describes modifications to LSP Ping to allow it to work with MPLS tunnels. It is possible that in some cases a provider may not want to disclose information about tunnels. The security considerations in the document describe mechanisms to keep this information private. In addition the security considerations reference RFC 4379 which seems sufficient.
One nit: the first sentence in section 1 is missing a closing parenthesis.