Last Call Review of draft-ietf-kitten-gss-loop-04
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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-02-09
Requested 2015-01-28
Other Reviews Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Tina Tsou (diff)
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Reviewer Joel Halpern
Review review-ietf-kitten-gss-loop-04-genart-lc-halpern-2015-01-28
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Draft last updated 2015-01-28
Review completed: 2015-01-28

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Document: draft-ietf-kitten-gss-loop-04
    Structure of the GSS Negotiation Loop
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 28-January-2015
IETF LC End Date: 9-February-2015
IESG Telechat date: n/a

Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments:
    Section 3.4 paragraph 2: "It is likely appropriate
   for the acceptor to report this error condition to the acceptor via
   the application's communication channel."  I presume that should be
   reported to the initiator?