Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-17

Request Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 18)
Type Early Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-11-09
Requested 2018-10-20
Requested by Susan Hares
Other Reviews Rtgdir Early review of -11 by Ravi Singh (diff)
Secdir Early review of -17 by Carl Wallace (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -18 by Joel Halpern
Review State Completed
Reviewer Sheng Jiang
Review review-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-17-opsdir-early-jiang-2018-11-30
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/M-08Y71O_IEX9f1phO5VMUHokzw
Reviewed rev. 17 (document currently at 18)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2018-11-30
Review completed: 2018-11-30


Hi, OPS-DIR, Authors,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

This standard track document describes an extension to BGP Link State (BGP-LS) for advertisement of BGP Peering Segments along with their BGP peering node
information.  This document is clear and well written. It is READY for publication.

Major issue: no.

Minor issue: no.