Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ice-trickle-16
review-ietf-ice-trickle-16-genart-lc-even-2018-02-11-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ice-trickle
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 21)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-02-22
Requested 2018-02-08
Other Reviews Secdir Last Call review of -16 by David Mandelberg (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -18 by Sarah Banks (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Roni Even
Review review-ietf-ice-trickle-16-genart-lc-even-2018-02-11
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/dWlHa0JAadgPzFKsolzswikFUuA
Reviewed rev. 16 (document currently at 21)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2018-02-11
Review completed: 2018-02-11

Review
review-ietf-ice-trickle-16-genart-lc-even-2018-02-11

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Document: draft-ietf-ice-trickle-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2018-02-11
IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-22
IESG Telechat date: 2018-03-08

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC
Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: 
In appendix B third paragraph "When performing full trickle, a full ICE implementation could conveying the initial ICE description or response thereto ..."  change to "convey"