Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dprive-padding-policy-04
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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-04-04
Requested 2018-03-21
Other Reviews Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Charlie Kaufman (diff)
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Review State Completed
Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
Review review-ietf-dprive-padding-policy-04-genart-lc-shirazipour-2018-04-26
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/A1w9OM8hZg3fUs93bIc0WMIHhek
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 05)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2018-04-26
Review completed: 2018-04-26

Review
review-ietf-dprive-padding-policy-04-genart-lc-shirazipour-2018-04-26

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Document: draft-ietf-dprive-padding-policy-04
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2018-04-03
IETF LC End Date: 2018-04-04
IESG Telechat date: NA


Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Experimental RFC but I have comments.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
[Page 3], Section 3 nits:
"(eg. "---->"(e.g. "
"signifcantly"---->"significantly"
"octects"---->"octets"

[Page 5], Section 4.4 nits:
"transction"---->"transaction"

[Page 5], Section 5 nits:
"octects."---->"octets."




Best Regards,
Meral
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