Telechat Review of draft-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility-16
review-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility-16-genart-telechat-housley-2019-02-17-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-02-19
Requested 2019-02-07
Other Reviews Intdir Early review of -14 by Brian Haberman (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -17 by Daniel Migault
Opsdir Last Call review of -15 by √Čric Vyncke (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -15 by Russ Housley (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -15 by Magnus Westerlund (diff)
Rtgdir Telechat review of -15 by Jonathan Hardwick (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -16 by Daniel Migault (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Russ Housley
Review review-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility-16-genart-telechat-housley-2019-02-17
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/FP8Go8q2Wn3WENc4uQ3sK5rE_5A
Reviewed rev. 16 (document currently at 17)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2019-02-17
Review completed: 2019-02-17

Review
review-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility-16-genart-telechat-housley-2019-02-17

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

For more information, please see the FAQ at
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Document: draft-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility-16
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2019-02-17
IETF LC End Date: 2019-02-15
IESG Telechat date: 2019-02-21

Summary: Ready


Major Concerns:

None.


Minor Concerns:

None.


Nits:

In the Abstract: s/section 4 of [RFC7333]/RFC 7333/
(because references are not permitted in the Abstract).

In Section 3.1, last paragraph: drop the '(' and ')'.