Early Review of draft-ietf-dhc-option-guidelines-14
review-ietf-dhc-option-guidelines-14-opsdir-early-tsou-2013-12-09-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dhc-option-guidelines
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Early Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2013-12-09
Requested 2013-11-15
Draft last updated 2013-12-09
Completed reviews Genart Telechat review of -14 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -14 by Tina Tsou (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tina Tsou
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dhc-option-guidelines-14-opsdir-early-tsou-2013-12-09
Reviewed rev. 14 (document currently at 17)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2013-12-09

Review
review-ietf-dhc-option-guidelines-14-opsdir-early-tsou-2013-12-09

Dear all,
This is for tool tracking purpose to repost the early review of draft-ietf-dhc-option-guidelines-14 in October.

The document is not perfect editorially -- some repetitiousness, but no
point trying to rewrite it at this stage -- but has a lot of good
information. It should move forward.

A couple of specific typos:

Sec. 19, para 4 first line: "cannot not" -> "cannot"

Sec. 22, para 1 second line: "exist" -> "existing"

Thank you,
Tina