Telechat Review of draft-ietf-cuss-sip-uui-isdn-09
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Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-08-05
Requested 2014-07-24
Other Reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Scott Brim (diff)
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Reviewer Scott Brim
Review review-ietf-cuss-sip-uui-isdn-09-genart-telechat-brim-2014-08-03
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Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 11)
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Draft last updated 2014-08-03
Review completed: 2014-08-03

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Document: draft-ietf-cuss-sip-uui-isdn-09


Reviewer: Scott Brim

Review Date: 2014-08-02

IETF LC End Date: 2014-05-14

IESG Telechat date: 2014-08-07

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC, with one nit.

Nits/editorial comments:




A new sentence needs reworking:

"If an interworking point is reached, and the limitations of
 the ISDN (see 

section 3.1

) are not met, then the UUI data will not be
 transferred, although the SIP request will otherwise be interworked,
 rather than have the interworking point attempt to resolve the non-
 compliance with the limitations of ISDN."




I suggest splitting it into two sentences, something like:

"If an interworking point is reached, and the limitations of the ISDN (see 

section 3.1

) are not met, then the UUI data will not be transferred, although the SIP request will otherwise be interworked. This is  rather than have the interworking point attempt to resolve the non- compliance with the limitations of ISDN."