Last Call Review of draft-ietf-curdle-pkix-06
review-ietf-curdle-pkix-06-genart-lc-dupont-2017-10-09-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-curdle-pkix |
|---|---|---|
| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 09) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2017-10-09 | |
| Requested | 2017-09-25 | |
| Other Reviews |
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Scott Bradner (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Shawn Emery (diff) |
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| Review | State | Completed |
| Reviewer | Francis Dupont | |
| Review | review-ietf-curdle-pkix-06-genart-lc-dupont-2017-10-09 | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/jBrQTQAs2cT3JaCJzMkIyAZl_CU | |
| Reviewed rev. | 06 (document currently at 09) | |
| Review result | Ready | |
| Draft last updated | 2017-10-09 | |
| Review completed: | 2017-10-09 |
Review
review-ietf-curdle-pkix-06-genart-lc-dupont-2017-10-09
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-curdle-pkix-06.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20171002 IETF LC End Date: 20171009 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and 11 page 14: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 2 page 3: there is now a RFC updating 2119 to solve the lower case keyword issue. I don't know if there is a policy about this, e.g., improving the standard 2119 reference text. I'll ask to the gen-art. - 3 page 4: "a small number of implementations may still require" for instance of (not ambiguous) use of a 2119 keyword in lower case (so now a priori in its English language meaning). Regards Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr PS: BTW I know this draft before being assigned as its gen-art reviewer, I even pulled a request to define these OIDs in Botan... So thanks to have done that!