Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-07
review-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-07-opsdir-lc-korhonen-2019-03-31-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2019-04-01
Requested 2019-03-11
Draft last updated 2019-03-31
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -06 by Acee Lindem (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Watson Ladd (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Jouni Korhonen
State Completed
Review review-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-07-opsdir-lc-korhonen-2019-03-31
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2019-03-31

Review
review-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-07-opsdir-lc-korhonen-2019-03-31

I read the document and think it is ready. IDNits warnings and comments are easily/automatically fixed when new version is submitted. 

I only have few editorial nits/suggestions. 
* Section 5.1 says "Assuming the below specified network topology.." while it could also use an exact reference to Figure 1.
* Section 5 is written so that it assumed the reader has already read Section 6. Maybe swapping Sections 5 and 6 order would make sense?