Last Call Review of draft-ietf-appsawg-multimailbox-search-01
review-ietf-appsawg-multimailbox-search-01-secdir-lc-tsou-2014-07-24-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-appsawg-multimailbox-search
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2014-07-21
Requested 2014-07-10
Draft last updated 2014-07-24
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -01 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -03 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Tina Tsou (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Stefan Winter (diff)

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review-ietf-appsawg-multimailbox-search-01-secdir-lc-tsou-2014-07-24

Dear all,

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.


**** Technical: ****
The two numbered bullets in page 5 (section 2.2) and the first and third bullets in page 6 (Section 2.2) should use RFC2119 language.


**** Nits: ****

Section 1:

> his extension allows a client to search multiple mailboxes
>    with one command, limiting round trips delay

Maybe something like "transaction delay" or something along those lines would be better?


Section 1:
> There is
>    now implementation experience, giving confidence in the protocol, so
>    this document puts the extension on the Standards Track, with some
>    minor updates that were informed by the implementation experience.

You may want to replace "informed" with "motivated".


Thank you,
Tina