Early Review of draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-13
|Team||Security Area Directorate (secdir)|
|Requested by||Terry Manderson|
Rtgdir Telechat review of -13 by Joel Halpern
Genart Last Call review of -13 by Elwyn Davies
|Review result||Has Issues|
|Draft last updated||2018-02-23|
In general, this document is well-written and considers security issues carefully throughout the whole architecture. nits: Abstract: /or not misconfigured/or misconfigured/ the fifth paragraph of section 6.1: the last ")" is redundant, therefore can be deleted some section titles don't comply the rule of starting from a capital letter section 6.5 /("IP security", see [RFC4301] and "Internet Key Exchange protocol version 2", see [RFC7296]/("IP security", see [RFC4301] and "Internet Key Exchange protocol version 2", see [RFC7296])/ suggestion: all the Figures (e.g., Figure 1,2...) should have a title for explanation section 2, please update the last paragraph to reference RFC8174 to indicate that lowercase versions of the keywords are not normative Section 11 (Security Considerations) Since section 9.2 has described the self-protection properties of ACP well, it may be useful in this section to mention them as a whole.