Last Call Review of draft-ietf-6man-maxra-03
review-ietf-6man-maxra-03-secdir-lc-salz-2017-09-14-00

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Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2017-09-15
Requested 2017-09-01
Other Reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Mahesh Jethanandani
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Reviewer Rich Salz
Review review-ietf-6man-maxra-03-secdir-lc-salz-2017-09-14
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/9g04kpXShMJRlLBHyxHk0q2CNyo
Reviewed rev. 03
Review result Has Nits
Last updated 2017-09-14

Review
review-ietf-6man-maxra-03-secdir-lc-salz-2017-09-14

I reviewed this document for SECDIR.  It's ready.  I have one minor editorial suggestion.  The introduction has this text:
  There are already link technology specific clarifications
   how to tune protocol constants for certain system with the
   expectation to reduce excess Neighbor Discovery Protocol (NDP)
   traffic. 3GPP cellular links are one existing example
   [RFC6459][RFC7066].

I would suggest rewording it like this:
   Clarifications for how to tune protocol constants to reduce Neighbord Discover Protocol (NDP) traffic already exist; for example [RFC6459] and ]RFC7066] for 3GPP.