Last Call Review of draft-ietf-6man-dad-proxy-
review-ietf-6man-dad-proxy-secdir-lc-wallace-2012-10-11-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-6man-dad-proxy
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2012-10-09
Requested 2012-09-20
Other Reviews Genart Last Call review of - by Roni Even (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Carl Wallace
Review review-ietf-6man-dad-proxy-secdir-lc-wallace-2012-10-11
Posted at http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/current/msg03566.html
Review result Has Nits
Draft last updated 2012-10-11
Review completed: 2012-10-11

Review
review-ietf-6man-dad-proxy-secdir-lc-wallace-2012-10-11

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments
just like any other last call comments.


This draft is well-written and is ready with nits.  There are some typos
and minor editing needed in places. The draft may benefit from including
some mention of issues like DoS or replay but a reference to RFC3756 is
probably sufficient.