Definitions of Managed Objects for Mapping of Address and Port with Encapsulation (MAP-E)
draft-ietf-softwire-map-mib-13
Yes
(Terry Manderson)
No Objection
(Alexey Melnikov)
(Alissa Cooper)
(Alvaro Retana)
(Deborah Brungard)
(Eric Rescorla)
(Martin Vigoureux)
(Mirja Kühlewind)
(Spencer Dawkins)
(Suresh Krishnan)
Note: This ballot was opened for revision 12 and is now closed.
Warren Kumari
No Objection
Comment
(2018-05-22 for -12)
Unknown
The obvious next comment is "Where is the YANG module?!" :-)
Terry Manderson Former IESG member
Yes
Yes
(for -12)
Unknown
Adam Roach Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(2018-05-21 for -12)
Unknown
Thank you for a clearly written document. I have some very editorial corrections
to suggest.
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§4.1.2:
> invalid packets that have been identified. There are two kind of
"...two kinds..."
> - The Border Relay (BR) will validates the received packet's source
"...will validate..."
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§5:
> DESCRIPTION
> "Indicates that the PSID is represented as hexidecimal for
> clarity."
"...hexadecimal..."
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Alexey Melnikov Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(for -12)
Unknown
Alissa Cooper Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
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Unknown
Alvaro Retana Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
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Unknown
Ben Campbell Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(2018-05-23 for -12)
Unknown
Please consider using the boilerplate from RFC 8174 rather than 2119. There are some lower case instances of normative keywords.
Benjamin Kaduk Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(2018-05-18 for -12)
Unknown
Please expand "Customer Edge (CE)" on first use.
Deborah Brungard Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(for -12)
Unknown
Eric Rescorla Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(for -12)
Unknown
Ignas Bagdonas Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(2018-05-24 for -12)
Unknown
A nit - maybe adding a paragraph mentioning that from manageability perspective this document specifies only a subset of what corresponding YANG module defined in I-D softwire-yang provides would be suitable.
Martin Vigoureux Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(for -12)
Unknown
Mirja Kühlewind Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(for -12)
Unknown
Spencer Dawkins Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(for -12)
Unknown
Suresh Krishnan Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection
(for -12)
Unknown